All Comments on 'Mouse Bk. 06 Ch. 01'

Mouse is one of my all-time favorites! The sexual tension at times is better than the sex!

Please, keep Mouse and Michael together! I like that Melanie stopped drinking before she did something she would regret too much and hope she keeps being sober.

Please keep Mouse and Micheal together

THIS IS ONE OF THE ABSOLUTE BEST STORIES I'VE EVER READ ABOUT BROTHER / SISTERS !!! THANKS

"Mouse" is one of the best stories on the site. Please do keep reading. The characters and plot may not always do what you want, but it is a fantastic story.

The absolute best!!

I love the games Mouse insists that they play! Please keep them together forever!

Loved this story again. Each time I read it is like a new story again!

Throught chapter 5 i was losing the feel of how important mouse was apart of the story and certainly missed her. It is glad to see mouse back in the picture. A while ago i told my girlfriend exactly what it was ive been reading for months and she wasnt to happy. Heh it only made it worse will i called her mouse last week during a moment :D luv the story very much

You keep turning up the complications a notch over and over again in a wonderfully effective way. I loved the whole Melanie thread and thought it was played out very convincingly, passionately and honestly. I also love that they play with her father fixation but I think you made the right decision to not take that one further steps into reality. For one thing, the parents are more sketched than fully realized and it wouldn't make sense. For another, although I have certainly read and enjoyed some of the stories where entire families end up fucking each other, I do think they're way past any point of true believability and what you've been doing very effectively is dancing right on the edge of taking things over that line, never making a misstep and not turning this lovely, highly-charged, always real-feeling story into a cartoon.

And the plot thickens.... this is amazing

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I only wish this site was longer. I can't think of any obvious improvements.

I love the Michael, Mouse, Melanie trio. Good interaction.

I loved the idea of Mouse living out significant events in her life. The fantasy of having sex with your parents just down the hall is so hot. This is one erotic tale.

Love the fantasy that played out in this chapter...can't wait to see what happens next!