All Comments on 'Move'

Well done. Good composition and pacing. Nice buildup to doing the deed. Liked it a lot.

very good

Absolutely fantastic. This story was brilliant. I really enjoyed the build up and the characters were great. Ending was slightly sad but I can see why it was necessary. Lovely.

the characters are believable. Good job. Best, Ken

Why couldn't it go on between the two of them?

thouroughly enjoyable, well written, god character development and damn hot to boot ! i had the feeling of being there in the moment like it was hapening to me, great job..

Loved the story and wish that you would have left it at the high point. Having them go seperate ways was disappointing (although I bet more realistic). I love a good love story.

I loved this story, as I have loved all of your stories! Great job and keep up the writing! I'm looking forward to more!

I loved the tension building in this. I know I'm a total sap for saying this but I screamed for a happy ending for those two.

What a Beautiful ending to a beautiful story.

This was a great story...maybe a sequel? That would be so cool.

I can see why they couldn't stay boss and employee, but why on earth did they not become a couple ? They obviously loved each other and the age difference was not really that big.

Like Timothy said, why? It didn't have to be a fairy tale, happily-ever-after, but the separation and abruptness had no explaining logic. As good and well-thought-out the rest of the story was, this was the only disappointment.

You had me hooked until you separated them..........they deserved the fairytale ending. I am a sucker for happily ever after.

This is one of the best stories I've read on here. And trust me...I've read a lot. I loved the build, the way it was written and how the whole thing went down. Simply brilliant!

Good job.

I loved this story five stars worth until the ending. It ended poorly. Why couldn’t they have stayed together? Why have an Irish ending? This story read as a love story, UNTIL THE POOR ENDING. hHow can you start out so great and end so rotten. The only thing that I got out of this was wasted time!