by MrMsScrewloose
I hope that there is another chapter soon because I was getting really into it if you catch my drift. The premise was good and the writing is also goof. Keep writing!
Yes you both have a screw loose. In fact your both mentally retarded.
Now I'm off to go give one of those idiotic macho revenge stories a 1 star rating.
An excellent story, gave it a 5.0 (★★★★★).
It is both erotic and true to life!