All Comments on 'Moving On'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
So sad :'(

This is absolutely brilliant, though I did end up messing up my make-up from crying so much. My heart goes out to her.

RockyStoneRockyStonealmost 12 years ago
OH damnnnnn

I can't add much more than the title.

RS

Iread2relaxIread2relaxalmost 12 years ago
Poor Karen

JUst read about her brother/lovers death. Made me cry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
small point but

LSD takes a couple of hours to kick in. I've never known anyone inject it. A dose lasts for 6-12 hours. I know it's not a story about drugs but it jars the reader out of the story.

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