All Comments on 'Mr. Carruthers' Garden'

Fantastic story....more please!

and they are beautifully told. Bravo. Will you write more of Bryony's adventures?

Nice story

I really liked the 'feel' of this story: sensuous; relaxed; and deeply erotic. It is also well written: the spelling and grammar don't leave me cringing.

I found the denoument disappointing however; I was hoping for MORE! But then, that's the effect of a captivating story.

This is, nevertheless, certainly one of the best stories I have read on this site.

I really enjoyed the story, you feel as if you are there. I was aroused through the whole story. Looking forward to more.

Excellent tale, beautifully rendered. Many thanks for the enjoyment you provide.

I have read and reread this story several times but never commented on it. It is an amazing tale that builds so cleverly and as such raises its eroticism to a higher plane. I would award it 10 stars if possible!

I was playing with myself and came so hard just picturing the mental images from this story. A+++++++++ infinity

The most amazing, inviting, and satisfying secret garden!^

Definitely would like a few of those flame orange flower plants for my garden! A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

What a lovely tale Max I have a fairly large garden here and would welcome the help of a young assistant to try and control plants and wild flowers that flourish in the most difficult of places. I have no statues or mounted figures of course, well I have one it's a copy of a Victorian figure, the whistling boy a special keepsake an aid memoire if you like I am most careful I do nothing to upset or damage him as I go about my work. I like it especially as the season progresses and he appears to be peeking through the foliage. I love my garden it is hard work so I can appreciate why Mr. Carruthers would need all this help. To that end I would have thought another four pages would e required to tell the story of Becky , Bryony and Jessica and how they all enjoyed showing the new assistant all around the gardens particularly the orange flowered shrub from northern India a region I have had some experience of myself. However the story, it is worth all of five stars and more but we'll have to content our selves with that.