All Comments on 'Mr. Fuckability Ch. 06'

by Savanna7

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
ahhhh.

To short.....plz update soon, I think I knw where they are gona meet again but I could be wrong...plz hurry an update.......p.s. love what your doing with the story its great can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
OMG!

Love love love!

My only complaint is that your submissions aren't long enough :,(

But so good!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
more, more, more

Please keep this story going...checking daily for updates, i am hooked!!

DecadentdessertDecadentdessertover 10 years ago
I love this! This was a great stopping point, leave us wanting more!

Can't improve on perfection. I vote to let this be the final chapter! Lol!

CallMeABritCallMeABritover 10 years ago
More! More!

Several chapters ago you gave us the clearest possible hint about who Danielle's big potential client at Monday's presentation would be. Therefore, Monday's presentation gives a huge potential for further developments of this story. You have referred to her negotiation skills and the fact she will need them on Monday (why exactly I don't understand but that point is incidental). But she has given him time to consider what he will see on Monday so weakening her negotiating position then. How about she recognises that on Monday but holds his clear attraction for her as her ultimate (unspoken) bargaining chip in the fraught boardroom negotiations to come? Thank you for an excellent story. More chapters please !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Fuck, you're dragging this out and you really need an editor.

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