All Comments on 'Mrs. Anderson Ch. 01'

GOD WOULD I LIKE TO FIND THAT KIND OF :WORK""?? HOPE YOU HAVE HIM DO SOME ..OVERTIME..BILL C

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Velvet hammer,

It's been more than two years since your last story, and I'm looking forward to reading the future chapters -- I hope there's many of them.

I can't wait to read how Mrs. Anderson expands her activities with the young lad. She is going to give him the education of a lifetime! Hope she turns into a real slut!

Promising start but you kept switching from morning to afternoon at the beginning.

This upsets the flow for the reader.

Thanks for sharing.

More a fantasy than a story. Not sure where any tension might arise.