All Comments on 'Mrs. Chamberlain'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Taught is not Taut!

Better grammar please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Looking for more

I would like to see you continue this story

dmg43dmg43about 10 years ago
WTF!!!

To many "authors" on here seem to feel is HAS to be part of the story that once the guy gets his "dream woman" for the FIRST TIME, he just has to "tease" her.

Don't understand that at all. SHEESH!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
While we're discussing grammar...

You meant RAPPEL, not REPEL.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
it is nice

to have fantasies fulfilled

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Small error

First page, about a third of the way down, before both women say "ooh" the word you want is "rappel" not "repel".

Good story otherwise.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Author, Yowzer!!!!. All of us have had a teacher like Mrs. Chamberlain. Unfortunately,

mine got married and moved away. Thank you for the entertaining tale. jntique

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