All Comments on 'Mrs. Feinman Steps Out'

Great story... until the end. It took 3 pages to build up the sex scene and one paragraph for the sex. It seems like the author got tired of writing towards the end and just wanted to get it finished. What a shame.

But I agree that it did end too soon, not badly just too soon. The plot is hot, the buildup fine, I liked her voices arguing, and the sex was good too. But to go from the sauna blow-job-in-progress to standing in front of the bedroom mirror needing a shower was a tad slam-bam-thank you-mam. To repeat though I did like the story. Thanks and lets have some more!

You wrote a nice story that you wrote until the ending came up. You developed a story quite nicely between Eddie and Ellen but the ending was way too quick and you just rushed through Eddie and Ellen having sex and her having an orgasm. I hope you write a sequel to the story and revise the ending. Please

one of the hottest i've read... great story.. BUT yeah, the sex scene was way too short to my liking. however, i like your writing. please more!

I splashed what felt like buckets-full while reading your story. Now I'm getting blue balls waiting for your next posting.

Thank you Marcia!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was great.

what a scum of the earth slut...