All Comments on 'Mrs. Jones'

(10/23/2021) Short sweet and erotic. Nicely done.

Incredibly sexy as usual ...

I liked this a lot. Only wish you had drawn it out a bit more. How about part two?

I found the story and the story telling to be very enjoyable! And there were only eight I's in the first two paragraphs. Please keep on writing!

The word is "sophomoric." Edit?

Jane

Hot, sweet with just the right touch of taboo.

Nicely done

... is innumerate! The first two paragraphs have the word "I" 8 times, not 25. This is a lovely tender story of long-awaited consummation, very different from the usual teacher-pupil story.

Decent enough story idea but sophmoric. I think the first two paragraphs had the word "I" 25 times. Edit?