All Comments on 'Mrs. Lachlan'

This could be the beginning of a great series. Just a tease for a start

More more more!

Great story! Great start! I thing Pete deserves more for being such a good sport. I think he needs to fuck the very hot Mrs. Lachlan. Make it happen. Thank you.

Well done description of a first blow job - the voice of the teenage boy was true-to-life, even if Mrs. Lachlan isn't quite. Hope to see more, especially more detailed and developed stories, from this terrific young writer.

couldn't believe my eyes reading this was like a page from my childhood, except that i never got my MILF. geat story hope to read more of Pete.

oh if only he could have gotten it up again that would have been great to have a sex scene in this story but still great story hope to see more of it in the future "jakk"

Every young boy's dream, personified.

One of the best MILF stories i've ever read!!!! I agree with everyone, I really hope there's more to come!

loved pete's tough guy voice.

Beautifully blended between story and the kink, please keep writing much more!

Another outstanding VertigoJ presentation!

This would have been one of my all-time favourite stories...

Why did you have to pick on the bi-sexual girls? I mean...I guess I know it's true that a lot of girls are just trendy "bi" to get guys, but still. I'm not. I hate when people think that. No fair. Anyway aside from that...wow. Don't stop.

Another awesome vertigoJ work indeed!

keep up the good work cant wait for part 2

That was the best, the very best young man mature woman encounter I have ever come across.

This story has to be the best one of it's kind, very well written with a very good character build, I would love to see more parts to this story, you have a great foundation for more chapters in this story line. There are a lot of path's this story could take.

My complements to the writer

Keep writing!!!

This story is great, lots of possibilities for a series.

mrs lachlan 2?

Hot. Write more.