All Comments on 'Mrs. Lucky'

It had humor, suspense, revenge and best of all love. Your story was also true to the first story from Jimmy's POV. I am glad that the Jimmy's wife did not become a slut. Thanks!

SleeplessinMD

yes, i would say that this belongs to this category. kind of refreshing to read a wife fighting for her husband on this category.

nicely written w/ humor. something original.

story.Your humorous stories are like a breath of fresh air on this site.You are one of the most readable new authors.

I do not have words of eloquence that would befit my state of rapture of this absolutely wonderful, funny and riveting short piece of fantastic entertainment.

I have been a fan from your first submissions and you just keep getting better and better by leaps and bounds.

I guess I’ve lost whatever objectivity I have as far as your works go. Please write a really absolutely awful story of every kind of deviate behavior you can think of and I can rail against your and feel like I’m not a groupie. DG does it once in a while and you can to.

Just Thank You so much

PT

Hey Peggie - get a life. Next - don't build this author up so much as for now he doesn't realize how good he is - just tell him he's mediocre with room to grow so he doesn't get a big head, get grandious & splendelifically hotaired 2 soon.

Look at what happened to HDK and rpsuch the poor bastards. I wouldn't wish that on anyone of any talent. Just think of the pressure to 1 up yourbadself each time out. Thats why DG Hear writes as little and as few as he does in his style that endears him to us in most cases.

Then there's that guy Wanderer-ing around England. He has cut way back to oh maybe twice a month and he writes once in a while 2 because every one chided him for being so good and unlike the others - down to earth and realistically a decent respected kinda guy - you know who he is - speaks the kings english so formerly - like a real tight ass not afraid to let his feelings show each story or so.

Anyway, since we both know those authors never read these comments, they will never know what we know - huh. So our stratagy is safe and simple - never let the good one's know how good they are and they won't ever leave us until they get betterer - so we're safe until someone rats us out. Now you know that won't happen so roll with it eh.

With Very High Regard

You are, without a doubt, the best of the new authors. The character work is great, the sex hot, and your warped, twisted and downright sick sense of humour is fantastic. I'll just wait to enjoy the next one. Thank you for your efforts.

You asked for it. I found out my wife was fucking my boss. I loved her so much I didn't care. I hid in the closet of the hotel room they were going to fuck in. I got so excited by watching him fuck my wife, that I jerked off. They heard me, when my wife saw the cum dripping from my hand she started to cry. She told me she was sorry, she would do any thing to save our marriage. My boss got excited and started to suck my limp dick. My wife freaked out and jumped out of the window of the 899th floor and killed herself. My boss promoted me to VP and let me fuck his daughter in the ass. life goes on OK rip me a new one. I dare you! LYG

as some one already said: good silly goofy heart-worming story about a protective person who happens to be the wife!

..is this supposed to be in the Loving Wife category? i mean, the wife doesnt care to do gangbangs anymore or even just be w/ another man. and she really enjoys having sex w/ her husband?!!!

Great story; well written, funny and original.

Thank you so much for a wife that loves her husband and her marriage. We could stand to see a few more in this section of Literotica

A REALLY loving wife.. She really marks her territory so her only known threat is eliminated.. Actually, HIS only threat. Good humour throughout.

Aside from grammaticial errors... but what are "barley-covered tits"?

I sure would love to see more stories like this please write more of this please leapyearguy

I give it a 500 for realism.

Pat

great work thanks

was that meant for a loving wife section in the true literal sense ?

It would also fit very well in humor and satire category..........I'm still laughing.. Thanks.

too crude and extreme

A truly great and humoristic story! I thoroughly enjoyed it! The few grammatical errors which appeared here and there didn’t detract one bit from the story. Please continue! You should make it a regular story arc.

DWornock is a Grade A Hater ( plus an asshole but the jury is still out on that) which means this story is that much more awesome.

Wish I could give it a 10! Written with humor and a sense of fun. Entertaining. Rob Conner

What a hoot. "the whole twenty bucks". Had a great laugh.

Great story. You have a knack for subtle humor some do not have. Write more like this please. Thanks!

What a concept -

Great story - plausible and possible too -

I do like how Jill turned out and the why of her life -it really complemented his so they do well together

Thanks for the wonderful tale.

As above

this belongs in the SUPER WIVES CATEGORY, damn this was as humourus as Mr.lucky,

to all the jill's who have not found their jim, "come find me!"

5*

Fun stuff. Nice to read a Loving Wives tale that doesn't turn into a freak show involving the "loving wife" humiliating and torturing her husband.

Go Jill!

Better than the mister tale. Funnier also. Now all we need is a mr. and mrs. lucky jr.

Oh Yeah

Just as much fun as Mr. Lucky.

Wouldn't mind another story featuring this loving couple.

Well done.

A nice story about a woman who loves her man enough to make sure he is happy even if a little clueless.

Well, I just read the first part to the story.

The pissant was never raped! Lana was just a bit aggressive but it sure the fuck wasn't rape. He got injured yes, but it was not her fault. She could not know he had weak blood vessels.

So basically the woman who was nice enough to give a poor schmuck the fuck of his life when no one else would, was pissed all over by a vindictive cunt who did not know the truth.

As stupid as the idiot was, he probably completely misinterpreted her calls and all she wondered was how he was.

She got exposed to STD, maybe aids, maybe pregnancy all for nothing.

Some commentators are treating this amusing story far too seriously. This is one "loving 'wife'" keeping her man sweet and untroubled, she doen't have any duty of care to the threat they face, so anything goes. Both Mr and Mrs stories were intended to be lighthearted and funny and this sequel hit all the right buttons, so 5* for me.

Super stories and a fun couple. Loved both stories. 5*

Both stories are beyond hilarious. Well done. 5*****

Both Mr. And Mrs. were hilarious. Great set of stories.

Funny story... I chuckle when I read comments regarding the story being unbelievable. You said from the outset that it was not realistic! (Then again, most stories on Literotica require some degree of suspension of belief...)

What a hoot!

Again,fun story. Sex with humor is always fun.

I enjoyed this, amusing, witty, fun and sexy.

Laughing

jtwheels

Lana????????

The Mrs. was much better than the Mr. I believe her when she says stay away from her Jimmy.

Another LMAO 5! Definitely soul mates, are Mr. and Mrs. Lucky. Lucky in love, lucky in revenge. Although his revenge result was really more the effect of luck than hers was.

Another funny story. Love the wife who’s so adventurous for doing stuff with her husband, and at the same time very possessive of him.

Great ending. 5-😊😊😊😊😊

Okay, I am hooked. Love your comedy stories. A winner! 5*s. Thanks for sharing.

Hehe. The wife is priceless. Not that she has Jimmy, that is all she wants and will do whatever she needs to keep him with her and love him. But don't mess with her lol.

Go jimmy go go jimmy go. Oh boy jimmy you go !!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂lucky jimmy ! 😁✌️✌️👌👍👍👍💯💯🤷🙋🙋

She's a loving tigress. Warning: Don't ever fuck around with her man. Lol!

What a woman. Dang Jimmy is one lucky dude. His wife gas everything she wants in Jim and will always protect what is his.