by christo
Nice job. No problems “seeing” the imagery as you describe it. Mrs. Reid seems like good neighbor, on several levels. Yup, sure does!
Looking forward to future chapters.
Is there more to this story. Like a next chapter? I really would like more.
Read through the whole series and it's simply brilliant. Well written and with a story I wanted to see to the end.
Sexy and very inspiring for me as a writer here.
At age 18, I was in the USArmy, & my nabors were not that nice!! lol
Got detailed to mow lawns for the officers quarters, but nothing like this happened!!
What a wonderfully written and descriptive story. I didn't realize how sexy a story could be! You took my fantasy and put it in writing. Awesome.
Super-HOT story.... your description of the Lady brings fond memories fromm the past and erections too hot to avoid !!
Thanks, great story, and well-told!
Will you ever revist this after a few years re reading this still turns me on so much i woould love another one of Mrs Reid
Nice. I like your characters and flow of events. Big tits are a major plus too.