All Comments on 'Mrs. Swanson'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Mrs. Swanson

Trusting there will be more experiences with the devilish Rachel Swanson!

tnadnudertnadnuderover 10 years ago
Early Problem

Lost me at end of first paragraph with, "Moving down her legs, she completely her appearance with a pair black pumps."

Think you mean "completed"!!!

Turtle1952Turtle1952about 8 years ago
More please

I think we need to bonk Mrs swanson a few more times at her house and maybe on a blanket in a park

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
It was all over the place.

His hands were in her back pockets but he took them out to kiss her then when she unzipped the skirt he took them out (again?).

She left him a message and called him Jacky when his name was Jake so it should have been Jakey.

Did you read the story before posting it?

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