by kayce 69
I always enjoy stories about hot moms. And making them sexslaves is just my cup of tea. Except for a few parts were it gets confusing. some " arent in the right places. and the perspective changes quite a bit. its good to know what the char are feeling. but you should either stick to one Point of view or do it from the omniscient point. But the story is hot, and i like the plot. Over all its still a great story.
This is not about incest. It's a sick story about rape.