All Comments on 'My Adonis'

germ phobia as a way to get some action. nice job. well written.

Now that was hot- totally loved it. And there will be a sequel, right? I mean they decided to meet in front of the gym to go to Thad's ;-)

Very good erotic ful filling story with excellent mutual full filling results.

(His cock and my submission to him are the basis of my fantasies these days. I dream of scenario after scenario in which I earn the privilege of sucking him off to completion. His pleasure is my reward. His cum is my food. His cock is my salvation.)

-that part was totally hot- great dialog/wording/phrasing_ so i was all ready for a story like that- but then you added them kissing and you added him looking up into adonis's eyes (alot)_ and then you added adonis on his knees_ and you had the sub ask the dom about going to the dom's place after.....and those parts made it not what the first paragraph promised_ the submissive was forward with the dom- there was no begging on the sub's part- there was no ordering around or dirty talk from the dominant to the submissive_ so addressing those areas would make it more a true dom/sub story_ but it wasn't horrible or anything- thanks for sharing it with us

Beautiful story, would love to have this happen to me.