All Comments on 'My Amazon Army Ch. 01'

hate stories about old men being made young again but I'll look for your work 'you are a good writer from what I've read so far

Thanks for all your comments guys... will do better!

Kinda disliking Mandy and feeling sorry for her boyfriend. As far as she can tell some complete stranger with a big dick shows up out of nowhere and she starts banging him.

Weirdly it seems a lot better this second time I read it, maybe because I read chapter 2 first and it got me interested again

I am thinking it is inside of him now.

Action at the end felt a bit rushed, but I'm curious to see where this goes.