by touchmate
This is more of a love story than lust. Like the sensitive way you tell your stories. I particularly loved the ending of this story and very happy for Padma. Keep going, write a sequel about Gita too.
you need to retitle this story so readers don't have to go looking for the first chapter. on sites like this ALL chapters of a series HAVE to have the same title with numbers or subtitles to tell what order to read them in. do yourself and all readers a favor and retitle this and do it right from now on.
This is probably a more beautiful,loving story than the first chapter. Perhaps Padma can visit her parents more often than every 10 years. Wonderful sensitivity, intimacy and gentleness.