All Comments on 'My Aunt & Her Maid Ch. 01'

for the cumming action. (yes, very bad.) Waiting for additional chapters to appear.

But I left it alone as it seemed incomplete. I see there's a part 2 so we'll see. I will say though that this part was fairly well written. Ronnie W.

Could have added another page; I'm sure there was more than just one night! While I'm at it,... Left everyone hanging.... out where Jordan and King always do- good job! And!, excellent punctuation, spelling; good breakage of topics... almost as if I edited it, myself!

Dan

Shame you didn't continue this story - original and pretty hot. The writing wasn't crappy but I thought it was a bad place to leave it hanging without adding another chapter soon after.

Can see where this line is going and waiting wating for part two.Love your story sujects,adding you to my favourites list