All Comments on 'My Awakening Ch. 02b'

That was such a great story. I loved it

My God so hot! Amazing.

You have to continue this story.

... out to get someone to help and guide you.

Someone to help you proof read and sort out the grammar and punctuation errors, the sentences that don't have an object and are therefore incomplete, the sentences that don't really say anything because there's something missing.

Go to Literotica Index; Volunteer Editors and there's bound to be someone who can advise you.

Otherwise, the story was good, just not quite as good as it could have been.

Make a third please!

please keep posting. love the story. keep,it up. they should end up together with lots of adventures. prom with little brother as a f... u or with sisters friend....

Nice story so far. I'm looking forward to reading more.

While there were a few errors, aren’t there with almost every story, I find it funny an anonymous poster would have a spelling error in their critique of your errors.

I am learning about me as they explore who they are.