by PinkIris
Great story line, good sex. Maybe a little more description of the sex, draw it out a little. Great job.
I really hope you decide to make this a continuing series. Nicely written and good sex.
You make me want to go back to the days of hiring babysitters, tho none of mine were ever like Macy.
Your scene with two women really made me hard. Very well written. I love to watch and you painted a very erotic picture.
- Jake
Very erotic, not to mention light hearted and fun. I enjoy a good fantasy that isn't angst ridden or overly dramatic or some Freudian power struggle. Sometimes, life and sex just need to be a good time, nothing more.
This would be a great chain story! Group sex would be an amazing chapter for her!
Babysitters were always one of my fantasies. Too bad they were only within a few houses away...