All Comments on 'My Babysitting Business'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Loved it!!

Great story line, good sex. Maybe a little more description of the sex, draw it out a little. Great job.

PunjiPunjiabout 12 years ago
Great Start!

I really hope you decide to make this a continuing series. Nicely written and good sex.

SLOgentSLOgentabout 12 years ago
Thank you

You make me want to go back to the days of hiring babysitters, tho none of mine were ever like Macy.

tellstory2jaketellstory2jakealmost 12 years ago
Very good story!

Your scene with two women really made me hard. Very well written. I love to watch and you painted a very erotic picture.

- Jake

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
is there going to be a part '2'

Very nice start. More please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Brilliant

Awesome hope there's more to come

verbicideverbicidealmost 10 years ago
Excellent

Very erotic, not to mention light hearted and fun. I enjoy a good fantasy that isn't angst ridden or overly dramatic or some Freudian power struggle. Sometimes, life and sex just need to be a good time, nothing more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well

What happened next. Did she go to college

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
We need more

Awesome story give us more of this horny girl!

A_StoneA_Stoneover 6 years ago
More!

This would be a great chain story! Group sex would be an amazing chapter for her!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So very hot

Babysitters were always one of my fantasies. Too bad they were only within a few houses away...

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