All Comments on 'My Beautiful Wife Jennifer'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Stupid people do stupid things. and Stupid story

Not in the slightest bit erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
W.T.F.

You must have a name tag that says looser on it for this to happen. How could any man ever look at him self in the mirror after this? Any woman worth a shit would tell you to get the hell out of her life, go back to high school with the rest of the boys cause you are not a man. Yuck.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
If it really happened it would be a nightmare

As a fantasy I can see where it would turn on a husband to have his wife used like a street slut, but in real life it would be too dangerous to let that happen. To lay in bed with your wife next to you and talking quietly about your fantasy to increase your and her sexual excitement would be a good way to get her aroused.Thanks for the story....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
pay up or put out

hell guys its only a story and i got off reading it. nice story ty

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
what

an awful plot. short and not erotic. if you run out of fantasies or can't write anymore after you got off yourself, please stop.

davion2308davion2308about 15 years ago
Good Job

It was a good story. These other folks don't understand the idea of fantasy. It's not real, it's for fun. Anyone can pretend anything. I have several stories which I'm proud of that got terrible reviews. Anyway, you wrote fairly well for a first story. It was good and I enjoyed it. There's room for improvement, but don't be swayed by the naysayers. Keep writing and keep praciticing. I'm interested to read more stories from you.

songgwritersonggwriterabout 15 years ago
Are you kidding?

Your wife got completely naked and fucked on the first time she ever did that....with strangers...for $50 ...they gave SINGLES for her to take off her bra...my wife would've looked at them and had them empty their pockets...that's ridiculous

gatormangatormanabout 15 years ago
Love the fantasy

Some people don't know the meaning of fantasy. And what gets one off doesn't have to get someone else off. To all the naysayers, lighten up. I'd like to see some of these "anonymous" posters have the balls to put their names out there so we can see what THEY'VE written (if anything).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Sorry I understand fantasy, but this is stupid.

Stupid people do Stupid things. A $50 bar tab isnt worth becoming a prostitute and taking chances on STDs and AIDS. Sorry folks that isnt fantasy it is just plain stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Love this story

What a great story. A fantasy come true. A wife that knows how to pay a bill! That's amazing. Great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Nice Story

The story probably could have been flushed out a bit more, like letting us in on some of the wife's shared fantasies. And $50 seemed a bit low for the wife to do this. Unless she had been flirting heavily with the one giving the money and she went along with it to fulfil her fantasy.

Don't listen to the anonymous morons. Their favourite stories are probable the ones littering literotica where a cheating wife gets caught and the husband divorces and ruins her. Stories written by and for men who hate women.

andysmith123andysmith123over 2 years ago

for fantasies to be fun there has to be some realism. Nice idea etc, but the STD risk etc is off the scale and the fucking was irrelevant to stripping. If a wife found stripping scary and risky she is hardly going to be the kind to agree to be gang fucked!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Nice fantasy! Now for the real thing: Similar setup, at a bar out-of-town, except we had plenty of money with us and no sex. After everyone had had a few drinks, my wife announced she had a special treat and got the owner to lock the door for the night. She then selected some music on the jukebox, climbed up onto the bar and did a striptease. By the time her panties came off, there were lots of banknotes on the bar, then lots more when she spread and bent over. No sex except her masturbating. When she finished after several orgasms, she left all the money there as a tip for the waitstaff, said she was in it just for the fun. The owner gave her a signed card entitling us to free drinks if we ever returned.

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