by WarmMilk
Wow! Her trepidation and surrender are absolutely hot! I'm thrilled to see you back on Lit. Can't wait to read the rest of the series.
Reading that was like closing my eyes and remembering what I had done ten years ago.
And I'm going to pay you the best compliment I can think of... which is "I wish I had written that."
Want more. Be interesting to see her and Mark alone, and maybe him introducing her to other lovers. Hope too see a part two!
I love the blend of innocence and naughtiness that you pull off so well, WarmMilk
Such a wonderful, erotic, tasty story. I only wish I could write this well. Drawing the reader deep into your erotic tale filled with such detail I could almost see it. And the thought of the sexy contrast between your dark smooth skin along side Blaines red hair and smaller frame. Such a sexy vision.Thanks.
Jesse
What a great story. I love the way you describe things; it makes me feel like I'm taking part in the action. I especially liked the girl/girl relationship.
However, it would be even nicer to hear you reading this in your beautiful sexy voice.
How about it?
Only couple things could've done without. Not a fan of tasting own cum, but the rest of story good. Little more action between roommates would be great. Love to see one get tied up. Still a 5!