All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Girl'

Very easy to visualize it happening, especially substituting the girlfriend of my friend :)

Too many typos and wrong words -- for example: "their" when you meant "they're".

Nice build-up, but then much too fast.

Take it slower. Much slower.

YOU'RE = CONTRACTION OF "YOU ARE".

YOUR = BELONGS TO EG: "YOUR SHOULDERS", "YOUR CHEST".

I think you should have a graphic detailed follow up of them passionately fucking hard again and this time her begging for him to cum inside her. Maybe doggy styles & multiple times too.

Wow I love sluty women they always turn me on with their move'