All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Mom Ch. 01'

More, More, More!!!

had a similar real life experience myself once

cant wait for your next chapter

Can't wait for the next chapter.

More please!

I never fought with Aimee, Jase's older sister.

Both Misses K and I instantly looked to the doorway and saw Amy, her daughter, Jase's three year older sister, standing in the door way, a look of pure shock on her face.

misses = Mrs I think

I read it to see how many screw ups I could find. I think the author should use either spell-check or proof readers. The poor quality of the writing is deplorable, hopefully the author will complete some classes on English.

Very sexy MILF action, great older young woman, and so much CUM. Love his huge cock too, FUCK, Great story!

"misses K"? what??? who wrote this? a fifth grader?

If this was to take place in the deep South, 'Missus' would be a normal pronunciation of Mrs., but not 'Misses'. Anonymous should not read any continuation, because if that's his only complaint, he should be more 'helpful' in his comment. The storyline is very nice and I'm waiting to see where you take it.

I'm concerned about the fuss being given to a word when we should be fussed about what happens in the story.

I, for one, got very fussed about the story line. There, but for the grace of God, went I some years ago.

Be that as it may, I think anybody with the ability to read (as opposed to write) would be able to easily deduce what "misses" represents. And make no fuss about it, either.

Nil desperandum, word nazis. You're hopefully learning something here.

To the writer, five stars.

Once again only BAD critics are from people who are too afraid to leave their name. Literotica should eliminate anonymous comments. I loved the story!!

To those who seem to have a problem with my verbiage, you missed the whole point.

When a teenager talks they don’t say Mrs, they SAY misses (or Missus in the south) so it was an attempt to portray the actual conversation. Secondly, this WAS edited by one of my new editors. Those of you who seem to be anonymous complainantants….either offer to edit, (and editing isn’t as easy as it sounds), or quit bitchin’!

I go to great lengths to write stories that will appeal to many different people. Not everyone will enjoy every one of my stories, but that doesn’t mean that others won’t. Even though the words come easy to me, getting the thoughts on paper takes much more work than one would think. If you have no respect for anything else, have a little respect for the efforts expended by the author and editor. Put your name to your work, as I do, and then make your comments!

Really enjoyed the story. Good plot and well written.

My only advice would be an extra proof read before submission for typos. Even pros have them in their novels so it's no biggie. You did an awesome job and I hope to read more of this story in the future.

A very hot and erotic story, with just the right amount of build-up and then the fantastic sex.

I would like to see Jase get some pussy too, if there is going to be another chapter or two of this fine story.

Thanks for the good read.

Please keep it coming. I really enjoyed the story so far

Great story with multiple steamy hot scenes. The slow build-up in the sauna was awesome. The one area I would preferred a different & slower build-up was with Amy. Great story and looking forward to the next chapter.

More please. Amazing story so far. Need chapter 2

Damn! What a great story! I Loved It!

Chapter 1 was incredible. Just saw there is a chapter 2!!!!!!! Can't wait to read it.

Overall flow of story was welll..but personally i feel the last scene should hav been slightly delayed....awesome story....cudnt keep myself away till end.

I hoped the mother would lay him down and let the daughter ride one head while she rode the other...

Thank you! So many possibilities. Hope the adventures continue soon.

Now with Amy and Misses K both satisfying our young stud he has the world in his pocket

thank you for the smile.

I like that the lead up takes quite a while and you didn't rush into it. Discipline as an author is nice to see, it makes the anticipation as a reader grow and the pay-off that much better. Thanks for the story!

Yeah, I know I'm anonymous. One of these days, I may get around to joining and helping to edit. Overall, this is a solid story and worth the reader's time. The lie/lay thing was a bit disconcerting, though. I think the word you wanted was "lay" as in, "He lay on the table." But great storyline and setup for future chapters (which I have also read).

Awesome story

What a wild story. Every teenage, sexually awakening boy's fantasy. To fuck his pal's pretty mama and sister. I never had anyone that close. Can't imagine a friend who would agree to anything close. Did a couple of buddies ex-girls. But nothing this sensual. I guess you could say she was growing him up pretty quickly. Don't know about growing him up "right" however...

True erotica at it's best! Love it!

Variety in partners, different organs and positions.

Excellent fluid production incentivisor capacity.

Not much more tho

Had me going. Nice sex. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Only issue was the one with Misses. "Misses" means two or more girls; it's proper English. Better to use Missus or Mrs parallel to Mister or Mr.

I enjoyed the build up of lust Mrs. K had going on. You developed the story line pretty well. Roused mine while reading.

Very entertaining read and great sex. Thanks for sharing.

Well done.

I think you just described every college guy's dream!!

Hot story. The added surprise if the daughter, Any, was juicy. Now on to chapter 2

Wow!

Why stop?

My only gripe is that some parts of the story betray a lack of familiarity with working out/the gym… broke the imme4sion for me a bit.

It reminded me of the porn movies from the 70's

"Fuck my daughter in front of her brother, and she won't be angry about you fucking me. Oh, let me bend her over for you so you can fuck her from behind.

Yawn.

A truly erotic and sensuous story of interplay of sexual hormones upon a group of willing participants.

I just wish that it was illustrated or -- BETTER YET -- a video.

THANK YOU

Don

Enjoyable and erotic adventure with the excitement of an older woman and young man. Adding the daughter in to the mix of catching them and then Mom catching daughter and him coaxing and coaching them.

Very well done, but the dinner conversation was ridiculous.

Nice ! I enjoyed it quite a bit so far.