All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Son'

I think I could have enjoyed your story but after 4 paragraphs of people talking with missing 'g's, I just got tired.

Your story built nicely and held my interest. I think the ending could use a little work. Keep writing!

annon you are pathetic ggg you miss out on a sexy story just because you want excact spellin ??michchick98 carry on please ok it wasnt perfect but boy was it sexy a nice mix of uncertanity and desire deff a B+ il be back to read more xx

The storyline was a bit rushed, but your telling of it left nothing to be desired! Kudos! Well done!

First off, to the person who complained about missing g's in the dialogue, think about how people speak in the real world, I think the author did a fine job on the story. A few grammatical and spelling errors, but overall a great story.

Second, remember not all authors on this site are professional authors, so lighten up a bit people!

Why is it that someone who can't write a sentence themselves thinks they are wise enough to criticize the work of someone else? I thoroughly enjoyed the story. The sign of a really good writer is an ability to make the dialog of the characters believable. You did that! During my youth I lived a wonderfully similar experience with a my mother's best friend and I thought your storyline was excellent. I'll be looking for a follow-up sometime soon. As for you so called "critics" out there, make it a point of keeping your hands in your pockets and off the keyboard "until you can write a complete sentence yourselves!!

That has to be every male teen's dream...to be indoctrinated by a sexy older woman he had fantasized about since childhood. Love your writing. Off to read more of your work.

It was nice that it wasn't too fast paced and that the characters held off a little bit. Then tension was really good. Lucky kid!

I enjoyed this story. I like that you build up your characters instead of just having people jump into bed after a "Hi, how are ya?"

My only criticism is that the end seemed rushed. You could turn this into a great series, but overall it was very readable and very enjoyable!

I really enjoyed the story Michchick. It was sensual and erotic. Keep up the good work.

A perfect story that every young guy dreams about happening!

But I liked it. I think all young men have fantasies like this. Thanks for writing it.

I actually had such a similar experience with the hot wife of an elderly neighbor. He had suffered a stroke and I did their yards once a week. I will write this story as I remember it now freshly in my mind. Thanks for the memories.

What a VERY NICE story that was!

Oh how things changed from when

Shell babysat for her best friend and how

a decade and a half changed the lives of

both Billy and Shell and how they now have

such a nice thing between them.

Would Amy really get mad if Billy and Shell

Married? when he tells his mom,"I always

wanted Shell, I always knew that."

Is there a second chapter at the altar?

Great writing, timeless story line and just enough detail throughout to make it very enjoyable plus bring back some great personal memories. LOL

This story line could run a few chapters expanded with the talent the writer provided.

*****Very Hot entertaining read with a sexy storyline. Thanks for sharing.