All Comments on 'My Best Halloween'

You could've at least changed the names if you wanted to submit this as your own...

Story would have benefited from some editing. There were issues where the names were not correct and it interrupted the flow of the story.

Yes, it could do with some editing, but it is fucking hot all the same! You covered a few of my fantasies in one go there... mmmmmm ;-)

I wrote this 2 or 3 years ago and posted on one membership site. Since I have been reading literotica for some time, I thought I owed this site a story, so I posted it here. It meets all criteria for story posting.

didn't read it but your bisexual warning earned you my vote. More writters should do this.

Loved it hope you will continue this story!

Thanks for the hot stuff!