All Comments on 'My Big Mistake'

Terrible in everyway. Poorly written , leaves the reader with no satisfaction in any way . Why am I even bothering to write a review ? So I can warn others against this awful piece of trash !

Kind of rushed in the beginning, but I like the writing style (yeah, yeah, grammatical errors, but nothing too bad). Enjoyable, there are some enticing possibilities for the future, but that future isn't there yet. So, will we get to see more?

i think it is the star of a good story and i hope you continue! pay no attention to the naysayers!

OK, didn't give the immediate gratification that some of the pea brains reviewing it need, but a nice build for a sequel.

Your story is not a turn-on. The way you spell mom as mum reminds me of the mummies of ancient Egypt. What I can picture are corpses not a sexy mother.

I dont usually read mum/son stories, (mother/daughter YES! lol!) but i saw the previous comment about mum and mom! The UK, we spell mum, and so, i presume the australians. You simply cannot rate a story on the way we spell mum! Its ludicrous, same as when readers moan about legal age. America is 18, the UK is 16! Sometimes the readers should find out where the author is from before slating a story for a weak reason. Back to the story though, you have the making of a good set-up for at least one more chapter. I seriously encourage you to go to your Aunts room... and by the sounds of it, she is going to enjoy you immensely. She may even put you over her knee and give you a spanking for being such a naughty boy! xxx

This is a good start, but the jury is still out. The following parts of the story could make or break it. Just don't rush it. Tease us a little.

What the fuck man. This was such a waste of time. My Big Mistake was reading this.

No real consequences, so no real harm. Try the aunt next time though.