by littlehomewrecker
It set everything up for second incendiary tryst. Nill advice for the coupling, but as the story goes further the characters should be progressively revealed including the oblivious wife. But so far, so very good.
We have another case of an incomplete story. I hate it when that happens.
I don't see how you can call it an incomplete story. Think of it as a sequel to at least a trilogy.
Well written, a believable erotic story, not quite a five but a solid four. The sex could be a little more titillating for a better score...just my opinion.
Chapter 1 was a bit slow to develop but good idea and introduction - so look forward to chapter 2. But this was a waste of time read and total disappointment.