All Comments on 'My Brother's Magnificent Cock Ch. 02'

With the premise of the story being that her brother has a huge cock is the only thing that keeps me reading the story.It is just a little hard to believe in a foot of cock,so I'm more to believe that this is a fetish type of story and will read what the author has to say about the theme of the work. The writing and structure of the story is good, and it's easy to follow. I'll be watching for the further chapters. Thanks

This story is pretty good, but it does need some grammatical help. Other than that, keep up the good work

I liked this story a lot, I can't wait to read what happens next! Time for her to give that cock a test run... ;)

It's coming along nicely but the chapters need to be longer.

It was OK until the 11.5 inches. I won't be reading any more. The wankers probably don't mind but I prefer more realistic stories.

just your typical lit. writer starts a story but never finishes it what a waste of time

Finish the story its unfair to leave it at this part!

I think you should really finish the story, Its wonderful and deserves a proper ending!

finish the story please its long over due!!!!!!

Omg!!! Dude!! Please please please finish its so awesome. It' doesn't deserve to be left hanging like that!

Great job, building me into a frenzy.

A cliff hanger, now finish it . you finally go him right???

Somebody finish this shit!!!!!!

cliche

another shitty story

Need more fast!!!! Please!!!!

This guy is a complete asshole. This is the second story of his he started in this category a couple of years ago and didn't finish. He can shove his crap where the sun don't shine. Won't read any more of this crap head's trash.

Thanks for sharing.

Story so mean to Niyima. She should have tasted the magnificent 11.5 cock. Finish it it up!!!