All Comments on 'My Brother's New Slut'

...but not a fan of rape. thanks for taking the time t submit a story

Just a bit too unrealistic for me. It became disappointing when it turned into a full-fledged gang-bang.

Sorry Bob. A real BOW WOW. Pulling a choo choo while only a couple of blocks away from hone, "ON OR NEAR A COLEGE CAMPUS" with a couple dozen guys and your brother in law, every one in town knew about it before she had her morning coffee and her husband will find out as soon as he gets home thus elevating the need to worry how to carry on when he gets back and is there.

Only an asshole loser would drug a girl for sex. Lit stories (for the most part) are all about fantasy. Why anyone would have this as a fantasy that tuned him on is beyond me. Guys who do this sort of thing end up in jail. Maybe going to jail is the real fantasy here.

He should have been able to be the only one to fuck her and turn her into his slut and no one else would get any of her.

But that's just my way of thinking.

Thanks for the story.

I liked it until others joined in. Don't care for that gangbang stuff. Good writing though.

He goes from not touching her because of his brother and then turns her into anyone's slut. Shit.....

.....every fuckin' time they outgun you!!!-Beginning to see a pattern here.Or many. Maybe that was just flashbacks. When are you going to post Robs' wedding here chickenshit!

The writing itself is good but I, like the others would have enjoyed it more had he kept her to himself, or maybe just one other friend. I also just about hurled when she made him eat her out. Gross beyond measure.

DID I SAY DISGUSTING?

Even though well written giving a woman something (as opposed to her willingly consuming it herself) is slimy in addition to illegal. Ugh! I know it's just a story but that doesn't mean I can forgive it.

Where your funky as goes to prison for rape along with your boys, and start fucking dudes because your family cut you off for this bullshit.

Such an interesting comment from this author, given the rape in "The Whore Next Door."

This is a new low, even for JPB. Nothing good at all in this farce. Drugs, gangbang, cheating with brother's wife. A good man.

Not a “rape victim turns slut” fan. Know too many victims to take this seriously as a fantasy. I’ll pass on voting.

Garbage says it all.

Another useless offering from this pathetic excuse for a writer.

Held my attention.

Like digdaddyrich and others, would have preferred he kept her for his own personal plaything.

More relational / romantic that way.

Still, 5 stars.

Shows the wildly varying scenarios/plots that

The King of Variety can come up with.

Paul in Oklahoma

I have no earthly idea why some people think JPB is a good writer. He literally writes the same plot into every story. The only difference in his characters are their names. The same, tired cliches EVERY TIME.

I guess people feed on stupid, and JPB offers stupid in copious amounts.

Your mom hopefully was a woman?? The level of disrespect u show by writing shit like this where a guy is trying to date rape a female and that too His own brothers wife shows the shit upbringing u have come from...u sem to have a fan base but for the love of god I cannot understand how a writer with this mentality can have an acceptable fan base....I guess birds of the same feather flock together???

U should hve been aborted at birth..would have been god riddance to Puky rubbish

I know what JPB is capable of, but if this was his first story I had read, I wouldn't read another one.

Good tale. While only one of the previous five commenters approve of/like JPBs writing, none of the other four do any writing so as to compete with JPB. Am I saying that four of five JPBs readers are assholes you readers will have to figure it out for yourselves. LP

Great story! Loved it!!