All Comments on 'My Buff Hot Sister Ch. 01'

Waste the paper to print this thing out so I could wipe my ass with it.

Like the Ford Edsel.

You don't write particularly well, but even getting past the obvious grammatical errors, this story just didn't do anything for me. Partly due to your writing style, and partly due to the subject material. If anything, I think you'd have been better off posting this under Fetish than Incest. You spent an inordinate amount of time and energy focused on the musculature of the sister, which is an indication that that's the source of your excitement.

This wasn't an incest story where a guy has a threesome with his wife and his sister, who happens to be into bodybuilding. This was a fetish story about a man's obsession with a muscular woman, who happens to be his sister, while his wife is present.

There's a difference.

Don't know how the story went, I stopped reading at the 9" cock

5' 6 woman and 170lbs.... man can you be little more realistic? i stopped reading after first para. best of luck

OI

Like the possibilities of future chapters. Your writing is a bit rough, but not bad for your first submission.

waste of time

funny how so many that comment negatively have no stories posted or show themselves as anonymous

Great story. Waiting for part 2