All Comments on 'My Chemical Romance Ch. 02'

Thank you for adding a sequel to this! I loved it! Hope you write more soon, you're an awesome writer!

loved that you added more of this story! hope to read more of your stories soon:)

That was surprisingly awesome. It reminded me of my relationship with my homeboy. Great story!!

100!!! Thank you for starting my week out with a BANG! Your work is wonderful. Thanks again.

I really enjoyed it; it gave me some hope :)

- Nubian Queen

Absolutely Fabulous!!!!!

*****

really nice love story. you are a good writer, keep it up.

I LUVD IT!!! T_T but u forgot the kiiiiids! *cries* COME OOON PROLONG THE STORY!!! ;[ i want more more.... =.=

You write sooo good! Please make sequel..

I loved this story. I read the first part and was so happy reading this to find out they stay together. The ending put tears in my eyes.

love it!!!!!!

Really good story

thanks for all the comments. i love that you guys love my work! this is great practice for me :)

Loves the way you write. Don't suppose you live anywhere near Detroit, do you? Naaaa.... I could never get THAT lucky. Any chance there'll be more to the story?

I met a young lady, not so much like the one in your story, but one that had more feminant qualities than any white girl I had ever met. However we never had the opertunity to get to know each other, this was in the late fifties and an interacial relationship was next to impossible, but I have thought about her many times over the years. Your story was a great read, and brought back some very nice memories. Thank you for a nice trip through some fine warm feelings of the past.

I love this story! I can relate to the first chapter more than I can relate to this one, seeing as I'm an 18 year old senior in high school & live in the south suburbs of Chicago. I wish I were Jayda so badly, that I almost envy her. This is a great story that I could easily see myself in. This will forever be one of my favorite stories. Good Work!!!

It was nice to have closure, but the writing quality was down a bit.