by kylewhitney
not only a hot story but very well written, was surprised that something on lit erotica could be written in the style I like reading most and still be erotic, well done, love the characters
Kyle, I love the way you describe stuff in your stories! Verrry visual! Please write more! I'll dedicate audios to you..lol.
Nice job, Kyle. Made me want to check out the video stores for someone alone. Maybe they need a partner.
It's so real and believable. I like how you take a character most people would find unappealing, someone people would assume has no real personality, and make him someone you really identify with. This is one of the best stories I've read. keep writing!
who has not been in a video store wanting the same thing excellent imagination