by Irish Moss
Enjoyed your story, look forward to more in the next chapter. Well done, thanks,
the group sex and swapping totally killed the story on the first page it just wasn't worth reading after that. group sex and swapping do not belong in the incest area that is what the group sex area is for. writers need to learn that when it comes to incest it is ALWAYS the fewer the better and no outsiders.
I would give it five stars, but I don’t give out 5 stars. I’m saving 5 stars for a story that blows my mind and this wasn’t it, but still a great story. So far all your stories that I’ve read are great. Keep it up.