All Comments on 'My Cousin Kathy'

As I said, this is a great way to start, keep up the good work!

I really liked it and can't wait to read more about these two.

I just hope you don't start involving other family members and make it an all out everyone fucks everyone story, there is already so much of that predictable stuff on here it's nice to read something different.

Story On! Great story. Thanks.

Good story, very entertaining (chuckled over "lucky charms"), solidly built, and the sex was warm and fuzzy! Could have been a good standalone story, but from the last paragraphs you seem to indicate there'll be more. Do it right & bring it on!

Marvin

Off to a good start. Hope there is more.

It was nice to read one where the characters weren't just barely 18 or 19 and giving away their virginity. These two being older and experienced made it more believable and enjoyable. No exaggerated body sizes; huge breasts or baseball bats for cocks. 7" did put him at well hung, but still believable. It wasn't a fuck story. Nice job.

more please

beginning. Looking forward to what happens next. Good build up to the sex.

This has the start of a good series, I'm just not that talented to think how it could go though.

Similar to the other commentators I enjoyed this story very much and am looking forward to (many) additional chapters. Well done!

No typos to cloud the reading. Well developed story. I think this should come out in the light and not be considered incest/taboo. The sex part was extremely well done. Both characters are easy to follow but not as easily to visualize. Good foundation to the loving relationship. Nice flow to the story. You have a rare gift for writing. Keep up the good work.

Love the fact she's a redhead and so open to the idea. I didn't expect the naked rule to start though (didn't see it coming). Could have used a few more details on the feelings of the sex while they performed on each other. Otherwise, I hope there will be a 2nd chapter very soon.

Crap from start to finish

I am hoping for more chapters of this adventure. Thanx.

Having the one mother show up at end of the first chapter was excellent. Looking forward to chapter 2.

I loved it and I want more, more, & more. Your writing is spellbinding. THANKS

Since Mr A. Wanker seems disappointed about many stories here, perhaps he can delight us with some of his submissions..,

I rather enjoyed the story, and look forward to more.

Thanks for sharing looking forward to future submissions.

Needs more chapters. Maybe Kathy getting pregnant.Thanks

You don't say where they are living (which state), but in some states it is legal for first cousins to marry -- so I hope this is in one of those states. Society, and parents, may still see it as incest, but these are two well educated adults who have finally accepted their love for each other, even if they are cousins. Let the wedding bells chime.

Damn fine tale. Look forward to reading a follow-up.

The story was well thought out... They didn't just fuck each other... There is room for many more chapters... Maybe a possible 3some or more... Not to mention maybe a pregnancy...

I agree with the others this is a great story and is completely open to continue. So don't stop.

But - for sure - when the aunts (or anybody else for that matter) walk in on ya... ya gotta know there is more story coming...

Even if the in laws don't get 'involved' - never mind MOM!- , there is easily 'more to the story'...

Looking forward to whatever may happen.

This story is very well written. It was a love story and was believable. I do have one criticism, though, How would they family's attention not be drawn to the king sized bed in the grandparent's bedroom? That would be a huge tip off and raise suspicion. Otherwise, this would have been given 5 stars by me, instead of 4.

It's generally fine legally for first cousins to marry. In fact, it is definitely not on the no-go incest list in Leviticus, for one thing. I had two first cousins who married and had a happy life together. I enjoyed this story immensely because for once, we had two grown-ups who knew exactly what they were doing yet still it leaves things open for more delightful story-telling.

A sequel to this would be welcome.

Let Aunt Deedee be genuinely confused. Let her pour over her own mixed emotions. Kathy and billy should just act like "we're just swimming, we are just cousins" but show no shame about being naked.

Have Kathy egg her mom to get naked as well.

could have used a bit more background and character development as well as a better proof reading but it was better than most but needs a second and third chapter.

Please continue the story.

I and it looks like many more have enjoyed reading this tale.

Good story, would loved to see a sequel. Maybe have them get married and start a family

I liked this, very easy, almost gentle story. Please tell us there will be more soon?

Great first chapter for a series. I do hope it becomes one. especially liked the fact that they have feelings for one another and it wasn't just a one night stand

This story was especially enjoyable for me because the first cousin I've been in love with since we were 15 is named Kathy. Good story so far, well written. My biggest problem with it, like so many of the stories on this site, is a "lucky" and unanticipated death which makes everything else possible. Would they really never have confessed their love if they had had to launch their relationship on their own without Grandpa's help?

I would love to read some more of the adventures of these two.

Enjoyed reading the story. I do hope there is a sequel.

Really hope there's a sequel.

How about some more chapters please

By the way: you're means you are, and your is something that belongs to you. I wouldn't say anything, but you striclty mix it. Similar are they're and their.

Why would you stop writing here?

A good set up, and a flow that works well.

Would be fun to hear what his Aunt thinks about what she's seen of him.

We know they're not the first kissin' cousins, time for him to baby her up.

I've come to the conclusion that there are far more unfinished stories on here that there are finished ones !

very well written and believable.