All Comments on 'My Cousin Mandy Ch. 03'

SPECTACULAR. I loved it!

Wow Crista, I loved it. I'm so glad you are writing again because you are truly amazing!

Love

Anne

All three chapters are really wonderful--they capture the sexy anticipation, the frustrating arousals, the joyful releases. I loved it.

The best writing makes the reader forget he is reading something, and instead makes him feel like a voyeur who is witnessing events actually happening. That's how I felt when I read this. BTW, praise from ANNE240 is high praise indeed...I've read all her stuff and it's FANTASTIC!

Crista, Your stories are so real that I also thought I was there. I am a bi-curious married man and understand totaly every feeling,and Yes ,I too fall off the wagon every now and then,

Please keep writing

I was transfixed by these three chapters, What a wonderful job you do of pulling the reader along. Honestly, I can't wait and hope that you keep up this beautiful story! Again, well done! Backspin

PLEASE KEEP IT GOING, GREAT STORY. LIKE A GOOD BOOK , COULDNT PUT IT DOWN. AWESOME

I LOVED ALL THREE CHAPTERS!!! By the end of this one, my pussy was pulsing with a force I didn't know I possessed! I have so much praise for your story and writing that if I named everything I liked, there'd be no room for anyone else to write a comment!(; You are an AWSOME writer!! Can't wait to read more on this series!

there is no words that can say how wonderful the feeling of passion and love two ladies can give each other. with men it is lust and sex, but woman it is LOVE and feelings that go on forever. great love stories you have written. DJ

I love your style. I found your story very exciting. It's one of the best I've read on the topic.

There is nothing like being with a woman. Soft, supple, so sensual. The arousal, the scents, I've almost given up on men just so I can be together with another girl. The story was superb. It made me want to be either one of the characters.

.......the end was too rushed.

Having finally got there, it seems you just wanted to finish the story and get it over with. I'd have preferred it to have been taken a bit slower and more drawn out and detailed.

But overall, a very nice sweet story.

I really liked your story. Great build up. I would have liked more detail about the actual lovemaking at the end.

Fantastic build-up. I could almost taste them from just reading the story.