All Comments on 'My Cousin Sasha'

I dont know if english is your second language or if you just dont know how to use spell chec, but this is horrible.

Horrible is a very generous assessment!

Sadly, even SpellCheck won't help!

The story doesn't come close to sounding real. You really should get an editor.

In my dictionary (actually several) the word "spunk" is a form of attitude or behavior not a slang term for semen, so yet another author that doesn't know basic terms.

wasn't the best story I have read but to the top comment, in England spunk is a slang term for semen, we don't really use the term spunk to mean courage.

Hey Larry 74403, just a suggestion- Chec= Check; and english= English-RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yeah sorry about the use of the word, its my first submission and im not so good at this

Good story, nice build up. Few gramatical and spelling errors but only rule nazi's nit pick about em. As for the comment about "spunk" I have no idea where that commentor comes from but around where I live in the US spunk means sperm too, it's also used the way he/she read it in the dictionary. Don't worry about the negative stuff keep working, you only get better the more you practice.

What the critics seem to forget is that you were probably typing with one hand and jacking off with the other . As far as the cousin experience, I have jacked off, finger fucked , mouth fucked and pussy fucked all of mine and second cousins too !

Cool story bro