All Comments on 'My Cousin Valerie Ch. 03'

by LoveAE

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Mark737Mark737almost 11 years ago
Keep going!

You made us wait for this latest installment. But it was worth the wait! I like how they haven't just dropped to the floor and went at it. Ethan is still arguing with himself over what he wants to do with her. And with Valerie. I LOVE small breasts! I will be looking for the next one!

AmungaAmungaalmost 11 years ago
More!

I definitely can't wait for the next chapter! This was the best one yet

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
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Keep going.

DwinohDwinohalmost 11 years ago
More More More

Please continue. I have to know what happens with these two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
YES!!!!

LOVE this story & can't wait for additional chapters. Gotta say tho that I have this sneakin' feeling that Val is STILL a virgin.....just kinda got that impression from all the BRAGGIN' she's done over the years & the fact that she's had a new BF every other week....

PLEASE continue this ASAP!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
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Please keep writing this story. It is one of the better stories on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
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Love the story! Please keep writing.

sabra16023sabra16023almost 11 years ago
Love the Story

Very interesting story would like to see where these cousins go. Keep the story coming. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Awesome

Please continue this amazing story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
keep going

love it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

awesome story cant wait to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Just great

I love this story and i cant wait till the next chapter. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
nice story

Id like to see this story continue, with the cousins being together and possible pregnancy for Val

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Awesome story, please continue love the story and characters, want to read what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great storytelling and momentum building

This was definitely worth the buildup of the previous two chapters. Excellent work. Please continue. I hope Valerie is reluctant mainly because she is a virgin.

W1ck3dM1ndW1ck3dM1ndalmost 11 years ago

pleas continue and maybe nock val up

LoveAELoveAEalmost 11 years agoAuthor
More to come

Thanks for everyone's comments, Chapter 4 has been written but I am still revising it to get it the way I want it. Please be patient!

GluonGluonalmost 11 years ago
Fantastic

Can't wait for Chapter 4, keep up the good work!

CastawayCloudCastawayCloudalmost 11 years ago
Well done!

As with my last comment regarding the previous chapter, I believe this is quite the developing story and LoveAE has done a superb job capturing the interest of the reader by building tension with subtle seduction. What I really admire about the story is that it does not just give away what the reader wants but makes the reader join these characters for the ride.

We are now coming into the relationship between Ethan and Val, and now that we've had a taste of the forbidden fruit it only makes us hunger for what is to come. Kudos to the author, you have a great talent and I urge you to continue to write!

Five Stars! Bravo!

CastawayCloud

OleguyOleguyalmost 11 years ago
Stunning foreplay description.

Your writing had me rather breathless at your description of their intimate experiences.

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