All Comments on 'My Cousin's Gymnastics Trainer'

by HappyBanana

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More

Are you going to add more chapters to this?

HappyBananaHappyBananaover 13 years agoAuthor

I plan to write a chapter 2 and 3 at least IF there's enough interest for it from the readers. Let me know if you want to read more. This is just the beginning for what I have planned.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Wonderful, creative with an actual story line. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Fun Story

Good tale and I hope there will be followups.

lazper12lazper12over 13 years ago

Loved it, more please. Left me with a warm, fuzzy feeling.

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptover 13 years ago
Hot and Sweet!

This story is wonderful. It doesn't NEED another chapter, but I will read it, if there is one.

HappyBananaHappyBananaover 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

After hearing such great feedback from everybody, I am proud to announce that I have officially begun writing chapter 2 today. Thanks for all the support and feedback. Looking forward to hearing all your comments when My Cousin's Gymnastics Trainer - Part 2 is published soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
babies

you had better make sure she gets pregnant often and has those 20 babies.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
amazing

This story is amazing,there should be more like it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Great story. Really sad to see pts 2 and 3 never got published. Was really looking forward to it when I finished this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very disappointed, but 5 stars

No Sequels!!! OR at least an epilog

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Need a bit more

Excellent, I too had a cousin that I wish something like this would happen with, no common blood, just related by marriage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Cousins

How did he never realize that his “cousin’s” parents weren’t his aunt & uncle?

Luscious_PatLuscious_Pat4 months ago

Love it! Good story telling too!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

gosh this story was wonderful. Im a hopeless romantic so all the lovey-dovey moments were just as boner-inducing as the actual sex. 5 star Story

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