All Comments on 'My Cowboy, My Heart'

I really loved this. A bit fast moving but none the less, really nice. Could have been a bit longer and I think this is a sweet story that could even use another chapter or two. Its really sweet and would be great to see more of this

with the comment below. It had a lovely start and end but not much of a middle. I think even just another page would do, so we could "see" their romance. Great job non the less!!

Some part go by very fast but I loved the story. Thanks for posting.

Enertaining story with good characters and plot. Thanks for sharing with us.

they steal my heart. yeah, i would've loved more in this from them! great job!

Fine, entertaining tale of romance. Thank you.

I love just a traditional love story every now and then. Normally I'd asked you to describe your chars more but in this case I happen to like how you didn't label their hair and eye color because you made it in first person so it's easy for the reader to imagine it's herself and her beau. So very well done.

WOW LOVED IT... PLEASE WRITE MORE COWBOY STORIES.....

could have been longer. You could have easily drawn this story into chapters. But good none the less.

It was sweet and romantic. You have to write more.

Such a cute story!

good story but too quick, it was just this then this then this. needed to be fleshed out a bit more.

other than that loved it, keep it up

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So sweet. I wish it was more detailed and more than two chapters.

This is a stupid story....im sorry but yeah

Too short, but otherwise, great idea, good characters and sexy end

Now for chapter 2!

but too damn fast...

Love both Seth and Erin, because they fall in love, make love together, and have a loving reaction to their impending parenthood. I love Seth's sexy body, and as a cowboy, hope that he has some good hairy growth on his sexy chest and abs. Did you ever think of a follow-up story to this?

You have a great love story here! I imagine Seth and Erin lying together, with Erin tracing her fingers in circles over his hard chest -- and tracing her fingers through the sexy dark hair on that chest and his rock-hard abs -- and their growing love. Get these two married at the ranch and settled in for a wonderful life together. You never give Seth's age, but I imagine him to be in his mid-to-late 20s, right? I'll read more if you're willing to write more!