All Comments on 'My Daughter, Alyx'

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shdwcatshdwcatover 9 years ago
Intriguing

What happens next? Do tell.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
EXCELLENT WAY TO OPEN YOUR STORY

It was nice to have a character revealed thru the telling of her life rather than a dedicated couple of opening sentences. Makes her more interesting by associating her circumstances and my own.

topleaseustopleaseusover 5 years ago
DAMN!

Very nice twist! Leaves room for a lot more to be told. Friendly gas of “One Up’ between Mother and Daughter never hurt no one ;)

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