All Comments on 'My Daughter Chelsea'

need more hurry with the next chapter

that was a great story I loved it the spelling needs a little work but thats ok I understood it

great

loved it, prefect.

can't wait to see if he went further, tried to sleep but couldn't. went back down for seconds?

great story

hot n' horny

please finish this - I anxious to see where you take it...

Your story is good but it has to many mistake in it. Use a spell checker and a proof reader. You leave words out and put the wrong words in.

I agree with the previous posters that this really needs a lot of editing and a good deal of work. Your plot is also trite; a veritable been there, done that spread all across Literotica. That being said, I find it hilarious that the other posters complaining of spelling and grammar errors all seem to have those issues as well. I'm beginning to think that Literotica is full of uneducated and ignorant fools!

I remember waking up to my daughter stroking me. I was afraid to embarrass her, so I let her finish. I know it was wrong but I came so hard.