All Comments on 'My Daughter Takes Charge'

im looking forward very soon I hope .... this can be a good mum

daughter incest beginning mum is a submissive but will beth be a good mistress yours leann5red

I wanted to post this story in the BDSM Category to remain consistent with the beginnings of the original story but he powers to be at literotica felt it fit better in Incest/Taboo. Personally to me it works well in either category. Hope you enjoyed it. Comments, Feedback, and Suggestions are always welcome. Thanks Susan

Not bad. Thought the girl must really hate her mom to treat her lije that but by the end I changed my opinion. Please beat and fuck her some more

I love the story so far and hope it will continue for many more chapters. May I also suggest that Slut's daughter get a chance to dominate her as well.

Thanks for the comment regarding including Sara, the daughter of Susan aka Slut into the story line. I am currently working on something along those lines.

I suggest that the daughter take over absolute control of Mary and the Master have somewhat equal access but only to take Mary out of the house. This is, of course, still up to the Daughter since there is lots that they can do together with her friends....

this is awesome!!!

Their move into incest was too seemless.

I didn't know this part of the story existed until the last Mary posting in bdsm. I wish you well, but I'm done with Mary's entire world.

Not sure where the next chapter should go, but I do know it’s time for the daughter to lose her virginity!

A little rushed at the start

Beth seemed to take to sex, lesbian sex, incest and BDSM a little too quickly for an 18yo virgin, but that apart, I enjoyed the story and how Pet became a sub to all around her. Lots of potential to take this in all sorts of directions

I gave it 4*’s

It was a weak opening but got really good. Im reading chapter 2 right away. Overall i really enjoyed it.

Friend This is a perfectly delightful little story. I wish very much that you could continue it. A.} Is the girl, that she is supposed to meet, a prospective slave or another Dom? B.} Is there any possibility that she could buy or swap to get Pet for her very own? C.} Was she going to dump all of Pet’s meals into the dog bowl? D.} She should have bought the “One-Tail” to PRACTICE WITH. E.} Everyone is being TOO NICE TO HER. Wait for the other shoe to drop. F.} She should go down on Pet too. G.} You have covered all sorts of Fetishes, Are you aware of “Smoking Fetishes”? It would be interesting to have a Dom ask a Sub, “Do you smoke?” “Well you do now!” I’ve read this one several times. I have to keep reminding myself: “No matter how many times that you read it, there won’t be any more chapters—Hint; Hint!!!”