All Comments on 'My Daughter's Birthday Gift'

by L.A. Wicker

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
More effort needed.

A good story not very well written, a bit more practice will go a long way, hopefully.

Thanks anyway

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

This was so hot! It would have been better having been a threeway. Or a personal favourite of mine would be the daughter walks in on daisy being drilled 😍

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