All Comments on 'My Daughter's Hero'

I loved this story, except the last paragraph. Some like the idea of incestous imprenation, but it's not my cup of tea. It implicates too many complications for me, I guess. Still, a great story.

Same old tired story that's been written 50 times already.

The author needs a good editor who isn't afraid to do what's needed. The author could also return to grade school for a basic refresher in English, finding a teacher who wont accept ending over half of all sentences with "..." which isn't good nor proper.

Loved the story; keep on writing. Some of these guys belong in the kiddy corner.

Great story but without a revision it won't be on the site long. You need to change the daughter's age to 18 at the start of the story. Otherwise, the Pedophile Police will yank it. Please do so and resubmit.

Ignore the negative comments. If someones tired of this formula, they should change categories. I think it was perfectly written

it was a good story all the way through until the very last paragraph. I do not agree with getting a family member pregnant, especially your daughter. Otherwise a great story.

Fabulous telling of a very loving relationship. They both must have elated at how there live turned out.

Thanks for sharing this well written story with us. Really erotic and hot, hope to read sequel.

Well thought out and descriptive!

A fantastic story you did well and kept it realistic the mistakes can't even ruin this masterpiece. Thank you for sharing your beautiful daughter with us I'm just surprised as it is rare to find stories here where the girl is so young.

Really very well written and descriptive story! I love the way the sexual intercourse proceeds slowly and deliberately and is quite intense.

Venua

what a beautiful story, the outcome was inevatable but it was still a good read

Absolutely love this story, romantic and about true love... I have a rather huge dislike of all those stories that treat incest as a relationship where there is alot of abuse. As long as love and consent is involved I see nothing wrong with it, just beauty of the love shared. Hope to read more like this, thanks alot.

It is a great story of incest love, they deserve to be happy ever after,thanks for this story

A LUCKY DAD TO MAKE PASSED THE ACCIDENT AND TO FIND THE LOVE OF HIS LIFE SO CLOSE BY,I LIKE THIS STORY AND IT SOUNDS SO REAL THAT SOME WHERE IT IS, MORE THAN LIKELY. I LIKE IT AND GIVE IT 5 PLUS ,I DO LIKE IT BECAUSE THE DAD/LOVER IS" NOT" CALLING HIS LITTLE GIRL A SLUT AND OTHER GROSS THINGS,ITS JUST LIKE IT SHOULD BE WHEN ITS ONLY THE TWO OF THEM, GREAT STORY AND EVEN GREATER ENDING I LOVE IT,ITS SOMETHING A DAD COULD ONLY DREAM OF..................GREAT STORY..........................."R"

Liked the story and how it developed although it took a bit long. As for myself, I am into and always LOVED just dirty, raw sucking and fucking for the pure pleasures of sex and being incest only made it more exciting and better.

Steve...

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Very well writen to the point of realism because of their love for each other. My X-girlfriend, 35 years younger. It was a wild and intense relationship to top all. Keep up the good writing.

What a beautiful story, your knack of combining sex, humor and love is a gift. great work.

Great story. Don't pay attention to the detractors.

They are "ignant". -)

My only complaint, you haven't posted more stories.

Favorite author comes to mind.

Hope all is well in your life

A hot and sweet combo. Wish to read more from you.

EXCELLENT reading, your style fits beautifully in with this genre.

Nope. Sorry. You lose all credibility when Hastings leaves the girl to fend for her father alone. Hasting’s life was just saved by the selfless act of his employee. He would have spared no expense and arranged for a live-in nurse for the duration of recuperation, thus preventing the possibility of a father-daughter sexual relationship.

I agree with Anonymous just below this comment. There is no way that Hastings would’ve sent him home without a home healthcare nurse for the duration of his recovery.