by ninefe2dg
what the fuck it's in the incest area and guess what no incest they don't even touch each other they don't even see each other it could have been a good story if you had finished it and they started having sex good start but like most writers you didn't finish it
Barely got past the first line.
Needless swearing on the first line. Italics all over the place.
Crappy presentation altogether. Just couldn't bring myself to struggle through it.