All Comments on 'My Dream Man'

A delightful read, and a great ending.

Well you done it again the ending got me again. As I was reading I was noticing that the end was getting closer with no end in sight. Then the last three lines killed the dream, I was in the world of your story wondering what was going to happen, then it did, thats twice you have done that, now I sit here waiting for the euphoria of the story fade away.

Well Done, great, no, brilliant story.

A dreamer lives forever. A nice twist!

Nothing less than 5* for that ending!

you can tell if your stories are going to be good...they last over four pages...but over two they are mediocre ..lack detail and substance...this is one of them

The only problem is that title is a sort of tell. She really knew what she wanted.