All Comments on 'My Fair Mare'

Try proofreading your story before submitting it.

You seem to have attained your objective: Rough, insensitive sex. I read this story immediately after reading another of your stories which projected sensitivity and caring. I rated the other one "5" though it was better than that.

This one I didn't like and didn't rate. You should write your stories as you wish. However, sensitivity and caring seems to bring out your best work.

As mentioned a little action was forgotten, but not bad for your second story. I'll be reading more if there is more to read.

RS

Good story. Although an important part was left out. The story jumped from being outside to being in the barn without detailing how/when her hands got tied.