All Comments on 'My Father's Boss'

buttttttttttttttttt ----- awesome + outstanding & excellent &

spectacular + phenomenal + bravo & encore

loved the story. very nicely done. and welcome back.

good story, but odd that the father would agree to the slutty outfit without an argument after the ground rules set at the dinner table. And odd that neither the father nor daughter would know Roxie was the boss's wife, especially if Cara was close enough to her to allow her to lick her pussy in the changing room.

but minor details aside, this was a good, well-written story, even though it should have been categorized as Mature until you get around to the father and daughter fucking.

Perhaps this needs to be under the subject on Non Consent or whatever, not incest. Maybe in the BDSM category. A wee bit to brutal for me.

very hot and verry sexy!! can't wait to read the rest! please don't keep us waiting too long. sweetie! 5 Stars!!

love,

david xxxxx

love the story MY FATHERS BOSS so very horny . and very erotic . now on to even more awesome stories . love the writing ever bit as much

to what appears to be a very exciting and arousing story line. Chapter 2 is certain to appeal to many many more, as well as me. Well done, excellent plot and development to the climax of this chapter.

Writing is great, with only very minor mistakes. I am so looking forward to the next part, can we expect it any time soon?

Loving your story. Keep up the good work. Thanks.

But good, keep 'em cumming !

not incest or even taboo in the least... not even pleasurable to read...

I can sort of see why a few other comments complained about it's category but that's a very minor flaw. In terms of the writing itself aside from plot issues another comment pointed to this is very beautifully written. Speaking of beautiful if that's you under your bio your really hot!

I really don't understand the compliantly of the story being in the wrong section, if you pay attention to the way the story is written there is a hint of forshadowing of what's to come, and by the start of this story it will soon be in the category that it was placed in

I hate the Dominant prick types, using power and influence to say "I control your life", but as an overall story not bad.

We'll see how part two progresses.

ES

It has a good build up and well written

Yeah...I'm not sure why this is classified as incest. It was not written by a woman, nor was it about father-daughter incest. It's a tease of a story and the fact that she gave herself to her father's boss is a huge turn-off.

When will the next one come out? Its been two months.

Very well written. Hot.

I liked the story: i wasn't expecing it to be my cup of tea, yet it turned out to be.

you need to do part 2!!!!

:-)

Hi stickivicki:

You did a good job. An erotic movie could be made based on this story! It would totally be a riot.

I am glad i came across this story.

You have posted quite a few stories. I will check them out another time.

5.0 = 💯% (☆☆☆☆☆) 👍👍!

I'm copy pasting an earlier comment.

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Silmarillion - almost 10 years ago

One hell of a start

to what appears to be a very exciting and arousing story line. Chapter 2 is certain to appeal to many many more, as well as me. Well done, excellent plot and development to the climax of this chapter.

Writing is great, with only very minor mistakes. I am so looking forward to the next part, can we expect it any time soon?

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Excellent: ★★★★★ (5.0 = 100%)!

I liked it very much.

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Niagara-on-the-Lake, Canada, Sep 7 2022

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☆☆☆☆☆ (5)

Eh. At least I hope good ol' dad got that promotion . . . .

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His cock popped out almost slapping me in the face with its hardness. I took it in hand and stroked slowly as I licked and teased the tip which was already moist with pre-cum. I took the tip in my mouth as I stroked faster, running my tongue over the underside in a zig zag motion. I stopped as he got too excited too quickly and went on to lick the shaft from the base to the tip in the same zig zag motion, covering it completely in my spit before taking his whole cock in my mouth, rocking back and forth slowly.

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Gave u a 5 star rating: 5* (4.75 = 95%!)

The story is VERY EROTIC; KINKY TOO!